Broken Wings

This was good, but I was confused by one bit. 'Where I found myself surprised me more than I would have admitted.' I was confused by the way we suddenly ...

Oh yea, my English teacher was always saying it's anyway, not you see, it made no effect on me :o And yes, I just read that and it DOES have ...

I fixed it...I think that's what you were trying to say, right? *points to first post* If not, I'm really, very sorry if I'm frustrating you. I can't help that ...

I wrote a little more, but I think the rest of the story will be written in my blog. Edit: Or not...

Well, I'm not sure what to say about that...it's sort of supposed to be like that. Thanks for pointing out my spelling mistake...except I can't figure out if it was ...

:) 8)

Well, Ky will be explained later. and yes, Ryan is the same boy who was sleeping. It says he got up, put his paper on top of Sarah's and the ...

:o I'm sorry. It's just a small thing, I haven't edited it or anything yet. But, I'm not going to spend the whole post making excuses for you. The point ...

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Wow, this is wonderful. I loved it! Very interesting, I can't wait for you to post the next part! I don't have any complaints.